
Standing amongst the ruins, surveying the damage,
We look out towards the horizon and beyond:
I can sense you keening to tearaway and abscond,
Cross the frontiers of limitations and language,
While I think only of dream homes and suicide;
Neither of which are really an ideal solution,
But possess the terrifying charm of temptation
For surely separate destinies could then coincide:
Picture us speeding through the roaring night,
Drawn irresistibly towards the final destination,
A painted backdrop against a scorching light,
That blazes and burns to the point of desecration,
During these last moments would our love abide
While we to the vast universe vainly confide?
Wonderful structure in this formal poetry. Stated in first person contributes To the strong personal emotion and feelings that are quite haunting. Well done Mr.Cake, truly impactful subject and form.
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Thank you Miss Heart. I think this belongs to the Death side of Cakeordeath. I do have a morbid side and I think it is best to own it rather than making out it doesn’t exist.
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I couldn’t agree more. Putting on a happy face, suppressing those demons, Disrupts the death side of Cakeland and after all this is the cakeordeathsite!
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I am laughing demonically in the dark.
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I believe it!
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Still laughing.
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same here.
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Job is a good one then.
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Indeed, it is a good one!
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Just as terrifying as depressing!
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Good my work is done. Terrifying and depressing, what higher praise can I ask for.
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Hehe, goody then 😁
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