
If only the big combo
Could come together
Become fused, merging
Into something other:
A magic orderly, precise,
Science raggedy, unruly,
An art exquisite yet raw
To fashion a language
With the suppleness of silence:
What vantage this vista
Would provide with a view
To die for, to kill for,
Into the realm of the marvellous:
Causing old habits of thoughts
To be sloughed like so many snakes-skins,
We would construct clouds into castles
And turn castles into cumulus clouds:
We would be welcome in a world
Where the everyday so-and–such
Glows with the sheen of the miraculous
Where a glance, the merest touch,
Opens up opportunities,
With all the divine hazards,
And dream chances,
Of a new dialectics of desire.
Wonderful! Magic as orderly and precise with science raggedy … you’ve turned the preconceived notion on its head. I’m going back again for another look to enjoy it again. Two in one day- you’re inspired!
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Thank you again. I like my paradoxes and inversion. The whole Alice mystique. Someday I am inspired, then I take a big long rest.
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Every one needs a nice long rest. But I’m glad you’re inspired at the moment
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I like my rest. Though hopefully the inspiration lasts for a little while.
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I hope so! Wishing you vitality and inspiration ✨
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I need it.
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A poem that requires exceptional insight, or perhaps an ability to read between the lines. A stirring poetry that prods the imagination. Well done!
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Thank you kindly Miss Heart. I had a little inspired moment and so did one poem after the other. Now I am going to rest on my laurels.
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So beautiful, deep thought poetry.
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Thank you. Glad that I give the impression that I am capable of deep thought.
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Hehe… Well, I’m pretty sure you arrr
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You are too kind as always.
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Poignant!
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Thank you, I think it was what I was aiming for.
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