Because this is all a game to you
I’m willing to play along this once
Who knows it might be twice
As nice as ever before or since
Yeah wouldn’t that be fair
Wouldn’t that be right tonight
As the weather is heating up
Something fierce something wild
Time to lose that dress stop allow me
Now now isn’t that better I want to
Look at you for a while drink you in
Pour me a measure fill the glass
Let me take a sip savour it slowly
Lets luxuriate in the anticipation
Of our joint venture this enterprise
A combination of hands mouths
The amalgamation of limbs flesh
Are you bored with symmetry
Time to take a different tack
Approach from an acute angle
Map out all the possible routes
Trace the outline of an imagined
Country outside the constricting
Confides of defining destroying
Memories and emotions those
Dead weights of ego and id
I am sick of making sense
Together we can regress
Wouldn’t that be sheer idiot bliss
Reduce everything to the now
Wait serenely for the inevitable
Exhilarating disintegration
A lush and luxuriant poem with wonderful word play; amalgamation of limbs and boredom with symmetry , ego and Id. A beautifully expressed desire for unity. The portrait of the lady stirs the imagination even further. It’s good to read your work again Mr C.
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Lush and luxuriant I like that. You know I like my wordplay. I love her work. Thanks for the lovely comment Miss Heart.
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It is my pleasure as always!
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Thank you Miss Heart I am glad you enjoyed this poem made up on the spur of the moment.
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Ones best best work is often done spontaneously, when we are in full contact with the present moment.
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My sentiments entirely, I am glad we agree.
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Amalgamation. I love that word. Another great poem Mr. Cake.
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Thank you very much, I do like that word as well.
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Oh and the absence of punctuation gives it an interesting flair. You have to read slowly or all in one breath. Very cool
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Well it does have two titles so there should be two ways to read it. Thank you very much Lily.
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Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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Thank you. What do you think of the two titles?
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Interesting… Two very opposing sentiments
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Not necessarily…I strive for ambiguity.
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Hmmm … twice as nice versus disintegration. Ambiguity indeed. You succeed
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Could be an and/or.
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Yes… outcome indeterminate. Wait and see
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Or one and the same.
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I guess if disintegration is equivalent to twice as nice
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I am a tricky customer
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Of that I have no doubt
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Indeed.
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Amazing poem, to be read in a fast way like a waterfall.
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Lovely metaphor Sue. That makes me very happy.
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