-I’m going to be late
-You’re always late
-Have we met before?
-You have always known me
Since the end anyway
-Quick hurry hurry quick
Underhill overvalley
Up up and away
This is a bird
This is a train
This is a bullet
-I would like to propose
A dialectic of chance
-Rather a toast
To the innumerable charms of women
Jade eyed goddess spare ribs
Heavenly portraits exquisite sculptures
-Hang on that is rather rich
Coming from you that gives
A whole new world of meaning
To every derogatory term I can think of
-Blue blue neon blue
Flashes and blinks the colour
Of my mid-morning dreams
-Too many voices
Subject to a savage distortion
Sending the cats and dogs
Of the neighbourhood into
A barking yowling frenzied cacophony
-Of course this is utterly without consequence
-But it may in fact be highly significant
-I will give you sixty seconds of pleasure
A moment outside time
A concentration of experience
The naked truth the bare essentials of existence
I’ll open your eyes when you spread those legs
-Droning on vocals fried
Ante post meta
Morpheus alpha omega
-The legends of a life
-Monsters behind the myths
-Cutting scratched breaking
A chorus echo of amens
-Immobile face and as heavy featured
As an Easter Island stature
Watching waiting before turning away
-Now I’ll never make it intime
This is mad! In the best possible way though. Alice for grownups. Smiling!
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That is best possible comment. I wrote it straight after waking up. My dream must have been a party scene.
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I love it when the unconscious manifests itself this way. Good that you wrote it down immediately, Mr Coleridge. And that you weren’t interrupted!
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I try to never be disturbed in the mornings but the world frequently has other ideas.
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Indeed… morning people
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Who are these people?
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Overachievers
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About time the meek inherited the earth I think.
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Agreed, as long as we get to sleep in
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Hopefully the meek wouldn’t be too pushy.
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Ha! Well, I wouldn’t think so!
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They better not start any nonsense.
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Or you will foment a rebellion? Down with early risers
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I am a live and let liver. Anybody can get up any time they like as long they don’t tell me I should do the same.
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Amen to that
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A tinge of sexiness, as always. I love it.
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Thank you very much. As it was an attempt at capturing a dream it had to have a spot of sexiness really.
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Shame we can never find our way back to such dreams! Love this.
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This was quite scary when I was asleep with all this babble but it was vivid at least. Thank you Chris!
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An artistic whimsy of a dream brought to life, an unexpected quirkiness with just the right amount of sensuality. I love the surreal White Rabbit with it’s saturation of deep colors, perfectly bizarre. I love this.
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Thank you Miss Heart I tried without even having a cup of tea to give the colour of my dream. I am always late in my dreams and that brought to mind Alice and I thought this still from Svankmajer movie the perfect image. Glad you love it.
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Very much. A dream of a poem.
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I like dreams so thank you Miss Heart.
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You’re more than welcome.
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It has a white rabbit dream quality to it. Interesting how the metaphors are strung together to make a broader image.
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Thank you… this is really a dream poem, the logic it makes is illogical!
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“Rather a toast
To the innumerable charms of women
Jade eyed goddess spare ribs
Heavenly portraits exquisite sculptures”
This is… whole piece is so breathtaking. It strangely reminds me of John Keats! So cleverly woven, causing true Carroll fans smile. Instant favorite for me.
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Thank you very much Miss Foxes, very high praise indeed. Carroll highly influenced the Surrealists so he tends to find a way into a lot of writing.
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You can call me April 🙂 What can I call you? And you’re very welcome – I loved every word of this!
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Well I am known as Mr Cake… I am very formal, though not without a certain sense of humour. I have plenty more poems if you are interested.
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Then Mr. Cake it ‘tis! Absolutely – which do you recommend first?
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Are you are too kind. Remember too much Cake can give your diabetes
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I’ve never had a sweet tooth, so no worries.
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I obviously do have a sweet tooth.
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Here is one from my one and only collection… it also has me droningly reciting it
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…. I’m pretty sure this is supposed to have a link in it but there isn’t one….
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I am terrible at links.
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You might like this. Thank you April
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