
I never looked at you in a sexual way before
But I am now and I’ve got a feeling
That once started I will find this cute
Compulsion near nigh impossible to stop
Now that the scales have fallen
From my eyes and you are transfigured
Into a Valkyrie, an angel, a vamp
An incandescent imago razing
My mind with intuitive intensity
Reducing my chaotic complexity
To a single lust, one driving desire
To possess you so that I can in turn
Be possessed and then engulfed,
No longer thrashing in the shallows,
Diving into the depths, a plaything
Of strong currents, subject to
The ebb and flow of tides
Battered by breakers and waves
Hearing oceanic roar, whale-songs
And the susurration of sighs
Only with you do I want or wish
To turn the petit mort into
An epic grand mal, a seizure to
Pause creation in its tracks.
But after that, what then?
I realise inside that your enigmatic
Wayward essence eludes, escapes
Me still; In my phantasy I have
Turned you into an alluring succubus
But it means nothing unless you
Reciprocate, dream of me,
In the dead of night, as an incubus.
A poem drawn of metamorphosis, established in its title. Intricate and wistfully sensual. Truly a beautiful poem Mr. Cake.
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Thank you kindly Miss Heart. I used the title in both the biological and psychological (especially R.D Laing) senses.
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This work of art is stunningly beautiful, it’s title perfection.
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You are far too kind, but thank you.
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Kindness has nothing to do with it, Mr. Cake. I would like to share this poem with your permission.
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Certainly I am honored to be a guest. Thank you kindly.
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It’s my honor. Thank you !
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Powerful and passionate, positively dreamy in a wonderfully wicked way.
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Thank you Lily….I see the alliteration is catching.
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Ha, yes… subconsciously I suppose. Very swept away by this, Mr. Cake
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Thank you…well it does have a lot of sea imagery
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Yes. Very potent imagery
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I am last of the symbolists really.
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Ooh, so darkly beautiful! Nice job Cake 🙂
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Thank you Christine… it was written in the dead of night so that probably helped.
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This is excellent: the way in which we create scenarios that will never be is perfectly captured in your words. And sometimes isn’t the fantasy, the dream, indeed more perfect than the reality?
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Thank you Chris. The interplay between fantasy and reality is central to this poem. They feed off each other until they come into conflict.
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Reblogged this on House of Heart and commented:
With Mr. Cakes permission.
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Very wonderful, enigmatic, love
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Thank you very much Sue…I always try to be enigmatic.
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Fabulous, Mr. Cake, simply marvelous!
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Thank you very much Resa, glad you like and a lovely compliment.
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Brilliant, imaginative, sensual. What a great verse. Nice one 👍🏻
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Thank you for the lovely compliment.
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OMG! I love the poem and the painting Mr. Cake! But please don’t have a grand mal seizure, it could mess up your Christmas. Cheers mon cheri!
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I will wait to the New Year at the earliest, definitely don’t want to mess Christmas. Thank you for the lovely compliments and have a wonderful Christmas.
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