
A subtle substance,
Nymphlight or gaslight,
Shimmers and shifts
On the event horizon
Before vanishing.
Emerging patterns,
Esoterically strange,
Point to the discovery
Of imaginary countries
And new crimes.
Chasing chymeras,
And weepy willow wisps.
Stumbling at every twist
And left-hand turning
Of the labyrinth.
Blinking in the sunlight,
Sleepwalking through days,
Only truly awake and aware
When asleep in the arms
Of Mother Night, and dreaming.
This is exquisite.
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Thank you very much…I can occasionally do exquisite.
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Great imagery…and of course Carrington!
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Thanks Chris… I do love Leonora!
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Oh, yes.
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Hauntingly otherworldly and mystical , perfectly paired with Carrimgton’s Labrynth. This shimmers and shifts so beautifully Mr. Cake. I adore. Wishing you a dream of a day.
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Thank you so kindly Miss Heart, lovely to hear. This one is more Cake than Death for a change. A change is good as a rest.
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Definitely more cake. 🌺
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Well I do like a bit of Cake
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What’s not to like? 🍰
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Well I do live in Chateau Du Cake so obviously I am biased.
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It’s only right 😊
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Excellent. A it haunting, perfectly written
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Thank you very much. A bit of a change but that never hurts.
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Soft and wispy, love it. Read it a couple of times, it’s like taking another sip of this gorgeous wine.
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Well I am delighted to be compared to a fine wine, but soft and wispy? Though I have to admit this is definitely one of my more delicate contributions. Anyway I am glad you enjoyed it, maybe I will do more in this vein, but then again maybe not…I am a tad unpredictable.
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Oh Mr Cake how beautifully you express yourself Oh Mother night, how it touched me.
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Thank you kindly glad you enjoyed.
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Always a delight.
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Mr. Cake, your poem – so smart! Just wow, and the last line perfect to my eyes.
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Thank you Miss Dawn… you know I do try and sometimes it is nice to have a winner.
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Congratulations! It’s stunning.
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You are making me blush Miss Dawn.
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So good to sit and take this poem in again. Hope you are well.
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Hello Audrey thank you so much …I am well just very quiet on the writing front, hopefully my muse and/or daemon hasn’t totally deserted me. Hope you are well.
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Thank you for stopping by and for your response. Good to know you are well, Mr. Cake. I’m quite well and reviewing my poetry, which explains the random comment. Always enjoyed your poetry. Sending my best to you and yours.
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Likewise to you Audrey, trust you are keeping out of trouble.
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I’ve always stayed the right side of trouble. 🙂 Too responsible for otherwise.
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