I propose a motion:
To elucidate the principle
Of absolute pleasure;
You may demur and say,
Well, that it is incompatible
With the fundamental nature
Of ultimate reality,
Or at least suggest
Tabling an amendment.
But just give me a night,
To capture a moment
An imitation of eternity,
To turn you on—To turn you out:
Upside down, round and round,
Within 360 seconds
I would take you
Beyond the Seventh Heaven,
Transport you higher still
To the abyss of the Empyrean,
That realm of fire
That burns deep inside
Between your spreading thighs,
I will accept the invitation
Of your parted lips
And swollen nipples:
Then pause— —
— — just for a while,
Not longer than a series
Of hammering heartbeats,
Because I’m cruel like that
And I want to be sure,
That you want me
As much as I need you,
So that when we
Are finally indivisible,
And I have seeded you
With the light of supernovas
And the unbearable heat
Of a million blazing suns
You come —
— not with a scream
But with the softest
And most heartrending of sighs
For after such pleasures,
There will be no sequels
And no tomorrows
Of such agonising intensity.
Thank you. I am only an occasional poet hopefully I am OK on the rare occasions. Glad you liked the picture, Hugo was an excellent illustrator, I have used her work before for poems and stories.
I can tell that you really poured your whole heart into this one. Maybe being an occasional poet is a good thing, because when we do get a taste of your words, they are written with a depth to them which isn’t often found. Simply amazing…
“An occasional poet”, my friend, you are one of the best I’ve read. This poem grabs up into a woman’s womb, holds her, and drags her around beautifully. You sell yourself short.
Very good!
It’s fine Miss Dawn I didn’t take you literally, it was just a startling image. Glad to know that it is evocative. Maybe I should write poetry more often.
This is exquisite. I’ve read it over slowly and more than once. When you imagine your lover whispering words like these, well… I am positively swooning. Really amazing.
Mr. Cake, what an intriguing poem, very well done. All in six minutes? Interesting meanings belonging to the number six. The following is a great play on words to be read so many different ways.
“And I want to be sure,
That you want me
As much as I need you”
As ever, the entire poem is smart and clever. Hope you’re well.
You’re most welcome, Mr. Cake. Six is associated with love, yet this poem seems to hardly speak of love in the common principle sense, it bridges a more ill defined eternity, ‘ill’ due to the limitless boundaries of the subconscious.
😉 Thanks, friend! 8 Mile is quite stunning. My sister’s best friend’s husband was an extra in the film! Now the bastard thinks he’s too cool for school.
Oh, you’re so good to me. Thank you. My mother says I was born a clown. I hate clowns. I think she’s trying to be polite. Bat shit crazy is what she really means. I didn’t get my swearing from her, that’s for sure. My first word was fuck, no lie, and that’s my dad’s fault. Hahaha!
Breathtaking… Lost for words…
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Thank you… I take it that you like it then?
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Even more so.
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Erm, you know what I mean. I more than like it.
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Thank you kindly.
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This is great – full of passion and desire. Nicely crafted.
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Thank you, maybe the image is a bit much but it was good to be writing poetry again.
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Exquisite and breathtakingly beautiful. Something to be read slowly and savored. I think the picture was a perfect choice as well.
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Thank you. I am only an occasional poet hopefully I am OK on the rare occasions. Glad you liked the picture, Hugo was an excellent illustrator, I have used her work before for poems and stories.
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I can tell that you really poured your whole heart into this one. Maybe being an occasional poet is a good thing, because when we do get a taste of your words, they are written with a depth to them which isn’t often found. Simply amazing…
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Thank you… I will send you some links of previous work. You are too kind.
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Sounds good… thank you. 😉
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https://cakeordeathsite.wordpress.com/2017/02/26/an-unsentimental-education/
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“An occasional poet”, my friend, you are one of the best I’ve read. This poem grabs up into a woman’s womb, holds her, and drags her around beautifully. You sell yourself short.
Very good!
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Ummm I can ensure you Miss Dawn that wasn’t my intention but thank you very much and I glad you enjoyed.
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Maybe it’s my turn to fear overstepping. I didn’t mean literally. Just that your words are evocative.
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It’s fine Miss Dawn I didn’t take you literally, it was just a startling image. Glad to know that it is evocative. Maybe I should write poetry more often.
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This is exquisite. I’ve read it over slowly and more than once. When you imagine your lover whispering words like these, well… I am positively swooning. Really amazing.
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Thank you I am so glad you liked. Maybe I have a talent for this kind of writing?
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Without a doubt! I love it
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Excellent
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Mr. Cake, what an intriguing poem, very well done. All in six minutes? Interesting meanings belonging to the number six. The following is a great play on words to be read so many different ways.
“And I want to be sure,
That you want me
As much as I need you”
As ever, the entire poem is smart and clever. Hope you’re well.
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Thank you Arcanum, I am glad you liked. Six is indeed an intriguing number and which I used for a propose.
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You’re most welcome, Mr. Cake. Six is associated with love, yet this poem seems to hardly speak of love in the common principle sense, it bridges a more ill defined eternity, ‘ill’ due to the limitless boundaries of the subconscious.
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No flies on you my friend… you know your numerology and psychology.
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What you can’t see is always far more interesting than what you can see.
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Spoken like a true esotericist Arcanum.
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A masterpiece of eroticism. Hats off Mr. Cake.
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Thank you Miss Heart…hopefully what I lack in quantity I make up in quality. Hopefully I will have a collection out soon.
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I can think of little more pleasing to look forward to. I adore eroticism, the good kind, like this.
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Thank you Heart, it is an important element in life and it deserves artistic attention.
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Indeed.
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You really are a fine wordsmith. I know because when I read your poetry, I get goose flesh.
For after such pleasures,
There will be no sequels
And no tomorrows
Of such agonising intensity.
This ending is exquisite in its finality. Heartbreaking, really.
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Thank you very much…maybe I need to cart my subject matter but maybe I shouldn’t.
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You’re so welcome. What do you mean by ‘cart?’
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I meant change… I am terrible at spell checking my comments.
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First and foremost do what pleases you until it doesn’t please you anymore.
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I never satisfied Kindra… I always think is that the best that I can do, really?
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I understand, Cake.
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We are a strange contrary bunch aren’t we Kindra?
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Strange and beautiful.
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Ahhh thank you Kindra ditto to you. I am proud of yer man Eminem… always knew he was a good un.
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Eminem is my secret husband. It’s a secret even to him. Ha!
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I always Stan was pure poetry. I thought his performance in 8 mile was excellent, very understated. Don’t worry I won’t tell anyone.
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😉 Thanks, friend! 8 Mile is quite stunning. My sister’s best friend’s husband was an extra in the film! Now the bastard thinks he’s too cool for school.
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You are always so funny and sweary.
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Oh, you’re so good to me. Thank you. My mother says I was born a clown. I hate clowns. I think she’s trying to be polite. Bat shit crazy is what she really means. I didn’t get my swearing from her, that’s for sure. My first word was fuck, no lie, and that’s my dad’s fault. Hahaha!
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Well don’t ever stop being yourself Kindra.
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I’d like to see someone try to stop me. 😉 I’m going to peruse your blog now.
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Thank you very kindly Miss Kindra.
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My pleasure, kind sir.
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Kinda my favorite
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Thank you. Though I have other good ones I think.
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You truly have. Didn’t make my choice easy…
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I try not too make it too easy.
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